How to Write Action Scenes that Pack a Punch

I love to write action scenes in all my books. Martial arts, spaceship battles, monsters–you name it, if it goes SMASH and CRASH, I love it and I want to write about it.

I’ve developed a little acronym to help me remember how to get the most out of my action scenes. Here’s a simple recap of the “POW” philosophy to help you write your own awesome action.



Remember that everything is connected. Think “The hip bone’s connected to the back bone …” Get out of your chair and pay attention to your body as you throw a punch. If you try it without any preparation, you won’t be very successful. But if you stand with your feet apart, bend your knees a little, focus on drawing strength all the way up from your toes, and PUNCH, you’ll find you can feel it in every part of you–and that your hit will do a lot more damage. Be aware of all those connections when you write about fighting.


Know the purpose of your scene. Is it simply something the character has to get through to get to the other side? Or is its purpose to show the reader something important about the character?

A plot-driven action scene is usually fast-paced and action-based.

A character-driven action scene is character-based and may have a lot more internal thought and character narration, which slows the action a bit.


Remember, “There’s nothing passive about action scenes”.

Choose powerful, active verbs, and always look for ways to strengthen sentences by eliminating passive voice where possible.

I’m certain that if you practice some POW when you write your action, it’ll totally pack a punch and your readers will FEEL it. Happy writing!


Alex 1 (2)Alex Banks likes to say she holds a black belt in awesome since the only kind of kicking-butt she does is on paper. She lives in Utah with her kickin’ husband, two sparring sons, one ninja cat, one samurai dog and four zen turtles.

Alex writes Young Adult and New Adult fiction (suitable for readers over fourteen) under the name Ali Cross.
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4 thoughts on “How to Write Action Scenes that Pack a Punch

  1. This is a nice reminder of what to focus on when writing action scenes. I find them especially hard to write so plan to keep POW in mind. Thanks.

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